Clare, I'm going to say that your second response is your strongest. In that second response you make a prediction, generalize about a type of character (most kids like Brian), and support your opinion. Nice job. The rest are ok, but a bit too short for me to sink my teeth into. The 4th one is on the stronger side too. Response #3 seems too plot "summarish".
Marlene - 5/5 Responses
Dudette, you've come roaring back. After Pahlahniuk I thought you were a lost cause. Seems Laurie Halse Anderson suited you better. Now, we need to work on the quality of your responses. Your job is not to summarize, but to analyze/respond. Look to the list of questions I handed out for help.
Sara - 5/5 Responses
I think I remember hearing about that (regarding your last response). I know he was almost killed while walking one time, but I think I also heard about that accident too. Freaky. I'm not too familiar with the book you read. I've read other King and enjoyed him (The Stand and Cujo).
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